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That was funny LOL

I was waiting for Germaine to say she had more cushion for the...well you get the drift. That was great.

Top Notch Entertainment!

I enjoyed watching this cartoon, the detail in the backgrounds and smoothness in animation make this one of the best animations submitted to newgrounds. I would like to know how that scripted camera works because if it eliminates doing a "tween" it would help me out with my project.

Keep them coming!

A good start.

Your graphics look good but you need to cut out the long pauses in this movie, more action. Also what would help if you would make your characters into movie clips that way you can make them more alive in your movie.

Keep Trying

Frank-Uselesschris responds:

I have about 7or 8 graphic clips for each character, im thnking of going over this animation agen and instead of shortening the scenes adding little things such as bugs crawling along birds and actually doing the fight scene

Very Funny!

It was fun to watch this. Reminded me of those old movies.

The only thing I found off was when the guy and the conductor ran back the other way in the train, the background was slanted the wrong way. It should have been slanted towards the right.

Keep up the great work!

That was great!

I thought the fight sequences were good and your animation is smooth. Too bad he had to get it at the end. Hats from one squirrel animator to another.

Good and room for improvement!

I have watched both, this one is alittle better but like a review before, the guy who is shot, is facing the wrong way. We should be seeing his head. The other thing that is in both movies is your zoom in to the gun, It changes from a old west revolver to a shot that looks like a 9mm.

Keep working on your skills, you have potential.

Good Job!

The other person who reviewed your movie said you spelled vaporized wrong...its not because that's how other countries spell it. The art work was goood, I would have changed a couple of the clips of the Enola Gay to an dark shot with the bomb bay doors opening with the siloette (sp) of the bomb above the city. Overall you did a great job!

PauLH responds:

Good idea, I was planning on doing that, but I never made a story board, just winged it. Thanks for watching.

The ending was too abrupt

It was too short..What happened after the last box fell? Did he just go in and have a beer? Did he go hunt the mouse down? Did he find his secretary with his wife in bed? Come on man finish this movie!

woopsie responds:

I got a whole bunch of ideas where to go with it, but you know. A combination of being busy and lazy and now i'm out of time really. If i get the disposable income i'm gonna buy flash and finish it.

I have to agree..

this would make a great new blam movie for when those lame submissions get knocked off the portal.
The only thing I could think of was at the end have the burnt up blam be flushed out of the box.

Great to see your work again!

I haven't been to your site in awhile but after watching that episode I will have to go check out what you have done recently. Great Job!

No matter where you go there you are...If you can't grasp reality then at least grasp the idea that we are someone's computer game gone haywire!

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