Ghostrider71's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[at the bar ep 1]

Good graphics but...

the voices are the downfall of this cartoon. If you made the cartoon longer with more jokes in it and put different shots of the people sitting at the bar that would help as well. Just watch some TV (do I really need to tell you to do that) and see how many times they change camera angles in a cartoon or a sitcom.

You have potential, keep working at it.

[MikeChaotix Flash Comic 1]

Keep working on those flash skills...

I think an cartoonist named Preston Blair has an online book that shows how to make mouth movements to look right in cartoons. I think you have potential judging from this movie (although the other two you showed, are not so hot)
Take some time and put out a polished movie.

[I like Zombies]

Where do I send my money to save zombies!

Great idea and execution. There are some sound programs on the net that might help clean up your sound. As far as the lip sync, good attempt for your first try. If you look up on the net for a book by Preston Blair, he has a chapter on what mouths are suppose to look like in cartoons.

Good job!

[True]

The "True" thing is over and done with...

This is about two years late to be really popular here.
I have to say the Humanatee is very unique character...I thought at first (in the other movie) he was going to turn into that 70's TV character with webbed hands and feet.

Your graphics are good and I hope to see more works from you.

[Math Class]

Right out of the gate!

This is very well animated. Its kinda short but really for what its based on I made me laugh.
I look forward to your next cartoon

[The Chick'n'Chuck Show]

Funny...

Your ending describing the poultry industry workings might make some people spew their McNuggets...but in all honesty its all about supply and demand.

Here's something else boys and girls you might not know... That bacon and ham you just ate the other day probably came from a pig that was 6 months old at slaughter...Now don't get too upset..on average a market pig will gain 2 lbs a day. So it doesn't take long for Wilbur to go from 30 lbs at 2 months old to 250 lbs when they are about 6 months old.
You gonna swear off meat? Well then swear off every product that has animal by-products in it!
Can I have your Jell-O?

tinyflea responds:

Too true, but them I'm vegan, so I already know all the shit :)

[Terminator food a no go]

Alittle better this time around...

But you need to get some consistancy of your characters down. Take your characters and break them down to Head symbol, Torso Symbol, Upper Arm Symbol...you get the idea. That way you have a library to choose from. Alot of work upfront drawing symbols you use over and over again will save you alot of time in the long run.

You can tell it was a different day when you drew the last part up. The one scene Ahnold looks like Tom Ahnold eating the chips.

Some scenes are too slow, cut them down.

Keep up the good work.

[NINJA SHADY(ep 1)]

I have to agree...

Too dark. Couldn't really see what was going on for the most part. Lighten up that layer of night darkness and show us your work.

FLASHDADDY responds:

ok, if i can ge rid of the alpha screen i will submitt it again

[Godzilla KingKong Teaser]

Has potential

I would look at your frame rate and possibly speed it up alittle to like 15 or 18 fps. The music was ok but there is alot of great stuff in the audio portal. There is a Old Godzilla vs. New Godzilla flash animation out there on the net, it might have some pointers if you are interested.

Keep working on it.

GeniusX responds:

Thanks for the tip man I upped the frame rate it looks great! I appreciate good criticism and that was perfect.

[I Think You're Pregnant]

Funny...

I think if you were to do a cut scene to show her stomach, maybe have it move around like she is carrying an alien baby inside her womb. Then reveal that he IS an alien and is there to eat his child.

Nice drawing, good sound (maybe some background music would be cool), Just think about doing different cut scenes to break up the monotinty of just one scene for the whole animation.

Keep up the good work!