Nice graphics but needs more plot
You did a great job on the graphics on this animation. But I would have liked to have seen what the boys nightmares were since that's what the bedbug implanted into him. Maybe monsters tearing him apart or being eaten alive by bugs...you get the picture. The music should have been creepier.
Keep up the good work!
Thanks a lot and iam glad you liked it! Maybe i do a sequal and ´show the nightmare, thanks again!
With an E-Card....
Try to have something more than just one graphic and text saying Merry Christmas...Check out the e-cards on Newgrounds and a couple of my submissions....You need to spend more time and effort if you want to survive the portal.
7 graphics, 10 movies, 1 song (3 minutes, 32 seconds long <i checked this>), 25 tweens, and 1 button -- that about sums it up. And yes, you are correct.
Alittle short but funny
I liked the concept and it was pretty funny how the Dad dragged in Christmas in. Your problem with matching up the voices with the mouth movements can be tricky....Try changing the sounds to play as streaming not as events, that might fix that problem, that and the volume on the voices was somewhat low.
Keep working on it you going in the right direction!
THANK U but that was kinda intentionally done! if anything ill make an updated version... without that!
A good start.
Your graphics look good but you need to cut out the long pauses in this movie, more action. Also what would help if you would make your characters into movie clips that way you can make them more alive in your movie.
Keep Trying
I have about 7or 8 graphic clips for each character, im thnking of going over this animation agen and instead of shortening the scenes adding little things such as bugs crawling along birds and actually doing the fight scene
Good Job!
The other person who reviewed your movie said you spelled vaporized wrong...its not because that's how other countries spell it. The art work was goood, I would have changed a couple of the clips of the Enola Gay to an dark shot with the bomb bay doors opening with the siloette (sp) of the bomb above the city. Overall you did a great job!
Good idea, I was planning on doing that, but I never made a story board, just winged it. Thanks for watching.
The ending was too abrupt
It was too short..What happened after the last box fell? Did he just go in and have a beer? Did he go hunt the mouse down? Did he find his secretary with his wife in bed? Come on man finish this movie!
I got a whole bunch of ideas where to go with it, but you know. A combination of being busy and lazy and now i'm out of time really. If i get the disposable income i'm gonna buy flash and finish it.
Funny...
Your ending describing the poultry industry workings might make some people spew their McNuggets...but in all honesty its all about supply and demand.
Here's something else boys and girls you might not know... That bacon and ham you just ate the other day probably came from a pig that was 6 months old at slaughter...Now don't get too upset..on average a market pig will gain 2 lbs a day. So it doesn't take long for Wilbur to go from 30 lbs at 2 months old to 250 lbs when they are about 6 months old.
You gonna swear off meat? Well then swear off every product that has animal by-products in it!
Can I have your Jell-O?
Too true, but them I'm vegan, so I already know all the shit :)
I have to agree...
Too dark. Couldn't really see what was going on for the most part. Lighten up that layer of night darkness and show us your work.
ok, if i can ge rid of the alpha screen i will submitt it again
Has potential
I would look at your frame rate and possibly speed it up alittle to like 15 or 18 fps. The music was ok but there is alot of great stuff in the audio portal. There is a Old Godzilla vs. New Godzilla flash animation out there on the net, it might have some pointers if you are interested.
Keep working on it.
Thanks for the tip man I upped the frame rate it looks great! I appreciate good criticism and that was perfect.
A Cool Idea!
A reward for posting the final vote on a submission under judgement...Very clever and funny to watch!
Heh. I poked around, and you could imagine how surprised I was to find out there was no animation AT ALL. I pretty much e-mailed the brothers Fulp with my trinket, and they liked it ^_^
Glad you did too.
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