Ghostrider71's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[No Plot Eps I (updated)]

Squirrels are funny....

But you really need to do more with the squirrel and the guy. Have him run fast back and forth as the he chews on the guys neck. More violence, maybe show the guy try to pull the squirrel off and watch the squirrel rip off his hand.
Keep Trying!

renokruse responds:

Thank you and I will.

[Shortie - "Cola"]

Funny but could have gone faster

It would have been even more funny after he shot the guy grabbed the pop can to find out he already gulped it down. The sound during the van sequence cut up a couple of times but the rest of it was fine.

TomokoSasaki responds:

that's a good idea! but too late now. thanks anyway. the sound doesnt cut out on mine but i guess every1's pc is different

[Ghost Motel 3]

Good progression but the music needs to be lower

I have watched your work and I have to say I like your series. The music on this one would be better lower so you can here the dialog you have done. Keep up the good job Violet-AIM:)

Violet-AIM responds:

Thanks. Glad you liked it. :)

[lkjvzsdlkj';lkj]

Funny and way to kill strawberry clock!!!

It was a funny toon. It could have been a little faster in the motion. Keep up the good work! Your preloader still had a problem here...I had to open the menu up and hit play. Go to flashkit.com or find a newsgroup called alt.macromedia.flash you can find help with preloaders there.

lakjsldfkj responds:

Not quite sure what you're saying about the preloader...works fine for me...did you see that big-ass button that said "play"?

Whatever, thanks for the feedback anyway!