Ghostrider71's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[jedeye]

Great graphics!

I would speed up your frame rate to 15-18 fps.
It does increase file size some but really makes animations look smooth. I would also get the preloader Tom put up on the portal and put some cool sci-fi music to this (like from the audio portal or flashkit) and dialog and I think this could go really far.
Keep up the good work

[The Adventures Of Wheelie]

The tv show called QUADS is better than this!

To slow to tell the story, Hard to keep someone's attention if all the main character does is drool.
Speed up the story, get some music from the audio portal because that's what made this movie sooo big. Go back to the drawing board and try again.

[Got Issues# Sm Stunt one]

Nice animation work....too short a movie though

The animation style is very slick but the movie took longer as far as the setup than the actual stunt. I think maybe a little more blood would have been good at the end. Otherwise very good movie.

[Soft Outer Crust Ep#23]

Very funny LOL

I have seen some of the other ones in this series and they were very funny. The sound quality though I think needs to be cleaned up up. Other than that great show!

[sprite hunter x]

Hmm...do you think out your cartoons?

First you are doing tweens with text...that is very bad looking. Then you have two music beds taken from Terminator and a video game. Nowadays you need to either find a midi version of those and convert them or get some original music from the portal or several other sites that have music beds for flash based media.
Now you should sit down and think out a story or at least do some sketches of what you want to do in your movie.
Ohh and maybe add some voices to your cartoon.
Keep Trying!

[.Hack//Vegietales]

Your point is.....

That you don't have the ability to take your idea and make it funny. Instead you make a poor excuse for a movie. Try again. Don't just make a slide show, make their faces move or something when they talk. Watch some of the movies that make it in the top 5 or even the ones that make it into the green. Put some effort into it if you are going to submit it.
Come on, you can do better, can't you?

[Alien Explorer]

Pretty good...but need more movement and sound.

Cool story and idea...you just need to flesh it out more. BTW...I like it when the alien says Thank God coming out of the cave..LOL. Some places you were missing sounds (shot gun blasts, cartoon running sounds)that would have made it play better. Your characters look good but you need to make them separate symbols with different face movements.
Also try to move up the speed of your movie to 15 or 18fps.

Keep trying!

[The Chase From The FBI]

Great Graphics and Good Idea

You have some great talent in your drawing, reminds me of the Puke and Chowder series at Camp Chaos as far as drawing style. But I would have to agree with some other reviews. You need to pick up the pace of the story. It seem to stall in places but move real well in the beginning.
And maybe to break up some of the longer scenes cut to a close up or different view. Also it would have helped to hear the guy say something.
Nice cars BTW. Keep Them Coming.